Revising HERS Pictures

Hi. So I said I would blog more to keep you guys busier (though I really doubt people read this. most of my pageviews are probably from traffic bots ;__;), and here I am blogging. You may thank me later. (Or now. Do thank me now. :D)

My most viewed blog post was the one where I wrote about my novel HERS. I'm pretty sure it was because I showed it to my NaNoWriMo buddies when I opened up my art shop (an art shop I have since closed because too many people were requesting stuff from me and I was swamped D: ) to show an example of my drawings.

Four months later...well, I could've done better drawings.

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AND THAT I'VE DONE! >:D

I revised them drawings. Let's start with Ricky, shall we?

Before:

I'll admit Ricky is really, really cute in this picture. Her face. Aaaah. ♥ But I did, however, have issues with her streaks an the shine in the streaks. Her hair is too dark and the line thickness is too thick. (She'd look fine if she was on her own, but she doesn't exactly fit my mental image of Ricky Runner. ._.)

After:

As you can see, I obviously fixed the streaks. And the line thickness. And everything else. I personally just love her new blushies o^o. I also added in the collar of her varsity jacket since, dang, I forgot to draw her varsity jacket in the previous picture. :I

Before:

I'm fine with pretty much everything...except her expression. -.- What was I thinking? D: Eva ain't gon look like that. She's kickbutt. Kickbutt with no emotions. >:I Kickbutt emotionless people don't make that face.

After:

There. :D I fixed her face. (I am a cosmetic surgeon. Fear me.) I made her hair lighter and less shiny (she's not a supermodel with supermodel hair, for crying out loud) and her skin color paler and ghostlier. Made  tank top less bright. Eva does not like bright colors. I also changed the font of her name into something more old-fashioned and gothic.

Before:

Sugar honey iced tea (if you know what I mean o3o), this picture bothered me more than Eva's old expression. D: First of all, her face shape is messed. It's shaped like a cashew. A flippin' CASHEW. DD: Second, her tongue...it's so bright and neon. TONGUES AREN'T BRIGHT AND NEON. Unless you ate a neon popsicle beforehand, but really, who does that? (Neon ice cream is so much better. :I) Lastly, her skin color is duuuull. I mean, not as dull as Eva's, but Eva's skin is deliberately dull and ghostly.

After:

Well, now her face doesn't resemble the shape of an above mentioned nut. :D Her tongue is more tongue-ish in color, and I darkened her hair into a more believable copper. I also turned her yellow hair bands pink and added the neckline of her swimsuit. (Yes, the girl gallops around, adventuring in a swimsuit. :I No judgment, people. Sue is six. SIIIIIX.)

and yet, after the three days i spent revising all three pictures, i still fail to give you guys a picture of harold arvenson.

XD Don't worry, I'll show you guys Harold's face. Someday.

But not today. :I

Funny how much you can improve in a span of four months, eh? :D

OH YEAH RIGHT AND here's a special shoutout to my cousin Nikka, who will be viewing my blog for the first time 'cause I told her to. XD I'm pretty sure that within minutes of finishing this post she'll phone me and tell me how lame it is. Thank you for your constructive criticism, Nikka :3. I changed the lame header just for you, ya know :I. (And yes, my non-cousin, non-Nikka readers; I have changed the header, as you may or may not have noticed. :3)

Peace out.